(V.1 ) First online draft of poem (one still in the daily journal) Emmy Horstkamp 21/1/2024
8 - Same programmed stop as the one from yesterday
7 - Sunday's timetable warns of an uknown delay.
6 - A few minutes or longer
one sign creaks marking time,
5 - Someothers warn of don't forgets
4 - Additional train news arriving
3 - Moving noone
2 - Every schedule fixed
1 - Artic
2 - Scraping metal
3 - Frozine zone gone
4 - Resting
5 - Incomplete
6 - Delayed
7 - Ages
8 Year
v2 by Emmy Horstkamp – A little bit later (lost my embedded word)
8 - Sunday's choice is someplace a little bit later,
7 - Stations stops today-yesterday are the same.
6 - A creaking sign, marking the time.
5 - Making announcements, lining up arrivals.
4 - Average fixed schedules
3 - moving everyone to,
2 - Final-destinations.
1 - All accounted.
2 - Scraping metal
3 - Freight round and cooled
4 - Right signal joined by ravens
5 - Iron welded holding whatever inside
6 -Dwindling minutes to read messages shared
7- asking for another second is not possible
8- Years gap between beginning and end too long.
V. 3 Final version of today’s poem – A Little Bit Later – by Emmy Horstkamp 21/1/2024
8 - Sunday's choice is someplace a little bit later, 7 - Stations stops today-yesterday are the same. 6 - Small creaking sign, marking the time. 5 - Someone making announcements to arrivals. 4 - Average, fixed schedules 3 - moving everyone to 2 - end-destinations. 1 - -Accounted- 2 - Scraping metal 3 - Freight, round and cooled. 4 - Right signal joined by ravens 5 - Iron welded holding whatever inside 6 -Dwindling minutes to read messages shared 7- Asking for another second is not possible 8- Years gap between beginning and end too long. by Emmy Horstkamp 21/1/2024